Yeah, but we have to get something in there for everyone. Wolfgirls, included. Given that we get two movies, I think we will have a nice balance for everyone.

There are so many little fun details and they have no excuse now. Like Stewy said, she is looking forward to not leaving anything out this time. The garter is so funny….Edward's last “F*ck You, Mike, I've got the girl” Ya know? LOL

Ohhhh… the scene where Jake, Bella and Nessie go out hunting in the snow, right when Irina shows up! Can't wait for that.

Well..
We need a butt shot from Edward on Emse Island. A sparkly butt shot that is ;D

i agree. Except a few people are saying they want her eyes to open up red at the end. I feel that's too generic….kinda like the ending to avatar.this is how i think i should end:
Edward is biting bella and sealing, and putting his venom into her heart while jacob is pumping her chest. Meanwhile Rosalie has baby renesmee downsairs. Just like in the book Jacob thinks bella's dead and is full of remorse and anger. Then ( just like the book) Edward reads jacob's mind and tells jacob to “leave then” but he continues like a crazy man pumping her heart..Jacob begins walking down he stairs. At this point i think it should be kind of slow motion while he's walking down the sairs and there should be a fading heartbeak in the background. AS the heartbeat of bella is audibly fading jacob sees rosalie gushing over the baby. we see him get angry at the baby. then rosalie turns all happy….Jacob and REnesmee make eye contact(maybe the anger could drain from his face..love replacing it) and Bella's beating heart finally stops…..CREDITS…….also i dont think bellas eyes should open red because remember she was supposed to sleep for a while and jacob and renesmee's relationship grows during that time. i also think its a better cliffhanger than….oh shes a vampire now. i think its more dynamic.

also this is the order in how things should play out for a great 2 hr (hopefully more) first movie.
1.Jacob's on the run…(in the eclipse script it didn't have where Jacob leaves because he's so upset…Remember that part? ) Maybe have where he's running through the forest and he can hear leahs voice because of the whole in sync thing. Shes sayin ” Jacob when are you going to go back home. get over bella yadda yadda” this is to explain why he's on the run.
2. open with Bella riding her expensive car with the town people looking at her…maybe to show it's from edward have a card that says it on the dashboard or something.
3. while driving bella's anxious…flashback to when she told charlie(they can make this scene shorter and shows bella saying “Charlie wer'e getting married”
“Are you Pregnant?” and have him grassp his gun.
Then cut to a flashback of when she tells her mom. Her mom said “She already knew” blah blah b;ah
4.cut to night time…day before wedding…steamy kissing (exact converstion from book when edward doesn't want to leave………then jasper and emmett come to get edward and he leaves.
5.Alice making over BElla..Mom omes in and gushes and cries. Capture bell's feelings at this point.
6.Charlie walks Bella down the aisle…we see how beautiful she is..When she sees edward we feel the connection….(“I Do's”) (their changed vows) kiss. “Man and Wife” tears
7.Reception….dancing..garter…jealous mike…”You look beautiful” from edward
8.Jacob's back..they meet outside…bella says she can have a real honeymoon..Jacob grips her arm too tight, and edward appears…The wolfpack comes and takes jacob away
9.on plain maybe edward can say “forget jacob. this honeymoons about us…THen on boat…
10.HONEYMOON awkward…jitters coming from the couple….edward strips while he walks into the ocean (btw the place there staying needs o look like the book) Bella's freaking out on the floor of bathroom….gathers courage ….strips, walks out into ocean….we can only see their backs…the rest hidden by water (WE belong together blah blah blah) passionate kissing next we see edward carry bella and plop her on the bed (think THE NOTEBOOK scen when that couple comes in from the rain….Btw ladies…. THE NOTEBOOK was rated pg-13…i advise all of you to go see their sex scenes then i'll assure you you have nothing to worry about..it was pretty steamy) anyways… kissing (“Promise to tell me if i hurt you”) fade to black on then rolling around in bed
11.bella wakes up all dreamily….edward looks uncomfortable…there are feathers in her hair…bed sheets are hecticly astray…(version of the exac conversation in the book) no more sex
12. Show maybe a collection like a mirage of scenes of them fishing and climbing mountains and such
13.black lingerie scene…edward gives in (Still very passionate but keeping with the pg-13 rating broken headboard…torn black lingerie)…the next morning edward and bella's conversation realizes they can have sex…rush to blue room…….(another mirage of sex scenes different places….cuz they did have more sex…
14. bella wakes up …..edwards note says he went hunting…bella doesnt feel well…..makes chicken thats “bad” she throws up….falls asleep…wakes up edwards ther….she smiles at him but her face goes pale and she rushes to bathroom…edwards worried (“Its ok ill just look for an advil edward!”) looks into suitcase looking she picks up a box of tampons with a note from alice saying… i saw you might need these…bella gasps and looks at the calendar on the wall calcutlating…edward finally comes in…(“youre on your cycle?)
“No im late…im never late..” edward goes stoic.”NO” bella looks in the mirror and lifts up her shirt…there we see a smalll little baby bump.
15. Edwards in the other room packing frantically and on the phone…we can hear his conversation…”CArlisle is it possible?”
bella in the next room can't believe it picks up the phone .we wonder who she's calling then she says”Rosalie?” (i left out the locals like kaure cuz theyy honestly rnt tht impotant imo but thats cool if you guys would like if they stayed)
16.JACOB….quil's talkin bout claire…. wolfpack jokin around maybe talkin bout how they saw leah naked…idk Jacobs angry because charlie told him Bella's back and she's sick.. he automatically thinks she must be a vampire and . Sam doesnt want to fight but jacob does for the cullens breaking the treaty.
17. jacob goes to the cullens… carlisle answers the door explains its not a good time…bella calls for him to come in and jacob sees how horrible edward looks hovered over blla on the couch..then bella flips around and theres her baby bump..edward and jacob talk outside…he explains its killing her…how bella wants to keep it … edward is relly messed up
18. jacob goes back to tell the tribe..now they want to fight and jacob doesnt.. but he surrenders to the alpha
19. jake talkin to embry feels his alpha powers …hes no longer a beta…sam wants to know wat hes done but cant compete to jacob's new alpha..ness..seth wants to join…. bellas getting way worse…cvisits her and stuff tells whats going on
20. leah joins the Jacobs pack…they argue ….carlisle says some doctor stuff regarding the fetus how its destroying bella…edwards still frozen rosalies all over the baby…so excited… bella drinks blood…likes it
21. more pack drama…they want jacob back but jacob is watching after cullens…bellas getting worse…alice gets a headache because of fetus…the cullens(except rosalie) are nice to jacob…feeding him
22.bella gets excited when jacob comes…he keeps her warm..talks about how charlie think shes got some disease and the future with charlie….fast growing baby…leah and her menopause while shes a wolf…like rosalie cant have babies..leah also tells him itd be easier to get over bella if he imprinted
23. the baby likes the sound oof bellas voice. jacob sees edward and bella finally looking like a family with a baby on the way…gets sad…edward gives him the keys to the car and he drives to the park hoping to imprint…it doesnt work
24.jacob comes back to hear leah angrily talked to bella about jacob. most of the family is out…when bella vomits blood…(here we go) gory birthing scene…you know what happens
25. finally this is the scene that i was talking about above

also the next movie should start with a black screen and we should here a beating heart getting faster and faster and faser and faster then she opens her red bright eyes

also this with at most 5 minutes for every scen i stated this could be a 2 hr movie…give or take a few minutes for each scen…..waddaya guys think?…its really long lol
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I really like it. almost EVERYTHING I hope they put in… the only thing I’m not sure about is skipping over the locals at isle esme, especially the woman, b/c that is when we learn of the story of the male vamps that look for human women to bare the special kids like nessie… I think that is a vital part of the story and also shows the reason E is frantic about it, b/c the mothers never survive… (Also a huge mistake on SM’s part was that she says they are called lobishomen, which is werewolf… I’m Brazilian and know that it would be simply vampiro or another term maybe used by the indians of Brazil, but lobishomen is definitely wrong!)Also they cannot leave the line where B thinks “can vampires go into shock”, I hope they work that in as a line she says… maybe on the phone to Carlisle…. and also B is fully pregnant when J shows up to check if she’s changed…Also for the going around the island they have to have B say “what can we do to wear B out today” or what ever that line was. lol I love it.I would love to see the interaction of Alice and Renee b4 the wedding, planning and Renee’s reaction to the Cullens. Also Charlie and B b4 the wedding… Bella seeing her reflection in the windows and not knowing it was her until E says that’s her. Also I think Alice puts a pregnancy test in the suitcase too doesn’t she? Also they have to have the scene when J goes to Charlie to talk about the ‘weird’ things and what he is to prepare him b4 taking him to go see Bella (in part 2)a few other things but other than that… GREAT breakdown!!!

I wanna see bella go all karatekid and her and emmett arm wrestling…ooo and leah and jacob tailove how awlking bout her period haha i love how awkward he gets

NO! We have to have Renesmee's birth!! It doesn't have to be super detailed and disgusting.. but we have to have some of it in there.. it's one of the most intense parts of the book. And since they're doing it in 2 parts… they better NOT leave ANYTHING out!

1st this person is crazy how are you going to cut out Renesmes birth it can be done in the right way not all bloody but I want to see the two people that love her so much trying to save her Jacob telling her to stay and pumping her chest while Edward is biting and injecting the venom and 2nd I think it should end with Jacob heading for the door to leave when you hear her last heartbeat but right before he walks out just like in the book sees over Rosalies shoulder a pair of brown eyes looking at him.

exactly… I meant it as if there was never a Bella (god forbid!! LoL!) But that's what I meant…
as for the pregnancy part, I hope they don't skip to much of it b/c there is just so much funny banter and a lot of what happens while she is pregnant is important to the rest of the story… but I see what u mean about certain things… But IDK I guess if they leave too much out from that section it won't b as good… cause that's when E hear's Nessie through B's stomach and they find out it's a girl, and B has always imagined it a boy, and tons of other things…
But yes, their love is the most important, but everything they go through also defines a lot of it, so I guess it's all equally important.
Also during the time she's pregnant is the most important for J and his slowly becoming friends with the Cullens and as well as Seth and Leah… So I don't know…
I love the whole thing! I hope it's ALL in there!

Ok so I completely agree with you. Then I think in part 2 we need the scene when Charlie comes to visit needs to be in there, J. Jenks, and I can’t wait to see the other covens! Stefan and Dmitri, Maggie, Benjamin, ZAFRINA etc. OMG I’m getting so excited and there’s still like 14 days til Eclipse, plus another 500- some days til the FIRST part of BD. Omgosh I can’t wait that long!

I love that in the books, Alice has Charlie wrapped around her finger. I really hope they portray that here. Charlie turns to mush when she is around. LOL

jajajaj thats what i have been thinking all the time. thats the perfect wayt to end one movie and continue the other one like that…

I know… Edward listening to her before she was even born. So cool. Rob’s going to have fun with that! LOL

yes he is… omg im just dying to se who is gonna play renesmee.. it better be a real baby..

Awwww….. Hi, Little A! I love thinking about those scenes. How are you today?

omg that will be freking awesome.. oh god imagine kristen and rob playing their role as parents.. oh my priceless…

Noooo!!!

Im crossing fingers for you!!!

At least you’re going in a car!!! But If that happens BE Careful!! =)

Ok We have our part one now hurry and get it to MR so she can say she wrote it and start filiming love it.